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Non-technical aspect of the review - since this seems to be targeted at a much wider audience than most documents that IETF produces (e.g. RFC7540 is most likely to be read by client library developers and server developers), I **really** think it would be best if some of the wording could be smoothened out to use simple/common English. I have no idea of the process nor how to edit and RFC, but if you need help I can help out with that bit. -- You are receiving this because you are subscribed to this thread. Reply to this email directly or view it on GitHub: https://github.com/w3ctag/design-reviews/issues/232#issuecomment-379431145
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