Re: [whatwg/fetch] Clarify Body package data algorithm with multipart/form-data MIME type (#424)

Sorry for the delay, looks like an improvement to me as well!

I would split some sentences in two so that they are more readable.
entry might need a link reference.
And I guess entry has a "value" and not "values"

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