Re: [w3c/pointerlock] Update for Shadow DOM (#4)

>            is already locked (or pending lock) the pointer
>            lock <a>target</a> must be updated to this element and a
>            <a>pointerlockchange</a> event sent.</p>
>  
> -          <p>If any element in another document is already locked the request
> +          <p>If any element in another shadow-including document is already locked the request

This has a similar problem to the above one @hayatoito noted. Although it is probably not a big deal since I think any reader can figure out what it means. But IMO it would be clearer to talk about roots explicitly:

"If any element whose shadow-including root is a different document is already locked, the request must fail..."

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