Re: [w3c/permissions] Editorial fixes (#100)

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> -    <p>
> -      Some <a>powerful features</a> have more information associated with them
> -      than just a {{PermissionState}}. For example,
> -      {{MediaDevices/getUserMedia()}} needs to determine <em>which</em> cameras
> -      the user has granted the <a>current realm</a> permission to access. Each
> -      of these features defines an <a>extra permission data type</a>, and then a
> -      {{PermissionName}} |name|'s <dfn export>extra permission data</dfn> is the
> -      instance of that type matching the UA's impression of the user's intent.
> -      Subsequent uses of |name|'s <a>extra permission data</a> must return the
> -      same value, unless the UA receives <a>new information about the user's
> -      intent</a>.
> -    </p>
> +      <p>

Sorry, I don't understand this comment :( 

In case I don't hear back from you in the next few hours; I'm about to shift focus to another project for 2 weeks, so could I kindly request that you fix this for me in the `editorial_fixes` branch? I've already fixed the `<var>`s (there are ~30 vars  that could maybe be converted also, but I guess we should do that in a new PR).  

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