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[XHR] i18n comment 1: Editorial needs

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Date: Thu, 29 Nov 2007 16:07:26 +0000
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Comment from the i18n review of:
http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/WD-XMLHttpRequest-20071026/

Comment 1
At http://www.w3.org/International/reviews/0711-xhr/
Editorial/substantive: E
Owner: AP

Location in reviewed document:
general

Comment: 
The introduction is rather stiffly written. Section 2 really should be divided into subsections. Among other things, it is difficult to reference parts of section 2 in its current state.
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