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Re: [Network Communication API] Remarks on the current draft

From: Innovimax SARL <innovimax@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 26 Jul 2007 21:55:53 +0200
Message-ID: <546c6c1c0707261255n2ed5b33t110e2668fb344d95@mail.gmail.com>
To: "Charles McCathieNevile" <chaals@opera.com>
Cc: public-webapi@w3.org

Great !

Here are more typos

On http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2006/webapi/network-api/network-api.html?rev=1.3

== missing comas ==
"To enable Web applications to communicate using TCP this
specification introduces the TCPSocket interface and a corresponding
optional security model."
-->
"To enable Web applications to communicate using TCP, this
specification introduces the TCPSocket interface and a corresponding
optional security model."

"Once a connection is established the connect event must be fired on
the TCPSocket object."
-->
"Once a connection is established, the connect event must be fired on
the TCPSocket object.
== fuzzy ==
"The TCPSocket interface enables a TCP connection from the client to
the server from which the script was downloaded and executed from"

Please explain on what apply "and executed from" ?

== precisions ==
"with a dot separating the two strings"
-->
"with a dot (U+002E DOT) separating the two strings"



== Consistencies in Reference ==
The date in the reference part are all "month year", except the last
one. Please do make them consistent

Regards,

Mohamed


On 7/26/07, Charles McCathieNevile <chaals@opera.com> wrote:
> On Thu, 26 Jul 2007 21:04:05 +0200, Innovimax SARL <innovimax@gmail.com>
> wrote:
>
> > In
> > http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2006/webapi/network-api/network-api.html?rev=1.2&content-type=text/html;%20charset=iso-8859-1
> [various typos and editorial errors]
>
> Thanks Mohamed,
>
> I will publish a new editors' draft in a few minutes with these
> corrections made...
>
> cheers
>
> Chaals
>
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