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[selectors-api] Editorial

From: <karl@w3.org>
Date: Wed, 26 Jul 2006 07:30:04 -0000
To: public-webapi@w3.org
Message-Id: <20060726073015.E144C4EFAA@homer.w3.org>

Hi,
This is a QA Review comment for "Selectors API"
http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/WD-selectors-api-20060525/
2006-05-25
1st WD

About http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/WD-selectors-api-20060525/

* Abstract
	[[[
	This specification defines two methods for retrieving Element nodes in the
	DOM using a group of selectors as defined in [Selectors].
	]]]

We encourage you to not use "this specification" to start sentences. Maybe:

	[[[
	Selectors API defines two methods for retrieving Element nodes in the
	DOM using a group of selectors as defined in [Selectors].
	]]]

* Introduction typo?
  http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/WD-selectors-api-20060525/#introduction

	[[[
	[Selectors], mostly used in CSS [CSS21] context, provides a way of 
	matching such a set of elements.
	]]]
to replace with
	[[[  
	Selectors [Selectors] mostly used in CSS [CSS21] context, 
	provides a way of matching such a set of elements.
	]]]

* Typo 
	[[[
	Using psuedo-elements …
	]]]
	



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