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Re: Updated draft

From: Jon Lee <jonlee@apple.com>
Date: Mon, 11 Jun 2012 13:09:08 -0700
Cc: Web Notification WG <public-web-notification@w3.org>
Message-id: <1BDE5E6A-33ED-491F-AA7D-CE8E00AAA710@apple.com>
To: Anne van Kesteren <annevk@annevk.nl>

On Jun 6, 2012, at 11:32 PM, Anne van Kesteren wrote:

> Any objections to publishing a new Working Draft next week?

No objections here.


My mostly nit comments:

Section 4:

... outside a the context ...
Remove "a"

Section 7.2:
Instance 2 code could read instead "2 new mails from John Doe" and the explanation shows that the Instance 2 title is shown.


Finally, I wanted to note that the current permission implemented in WebKit is similar to what was in the old Feature Permissions spec, which was Notification.permissionLevel(), instead of what is written in this draft, the static property Notification.permission. But, I think this makes better sense. I assume this might be modeled after a similar aspect in another spec?

Cheers,
Jon
Received on Monday, 11 June 2012 20:09:37 GMT

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