RE: L3 SC4: Intent of this success criterion

Thanks, John. That's much clearer.

Loretta Guarino Reid
lguarino@adobe.com
Adobe Systems, Acrobat Engineering 

> -----Original Message-----
> From: John M Slatin [mailto:john_slatin@austin.utexas.edu]
> Sent: Monday, September 19, 2005 9:33 AM
> To: Loretta Guarino Reid; public-wcag-teamb@w3.org
> Subject: RE: L3 SC4: Intent of this success criterion
> 
> Thanks, Loretta. A couple of small editorial changes:
> 
> 
> <proposalWithEdits>
> The intent of this success criterion is to help users understand what
> information is contained in different sections of the content. When
> sections have clear and descriptive titles, users can find the
> information they seek more easily, and they can understand the
> relationships between different parts of the content more easily.
> </proposalWithEdits>
> <Loretta's proposal>
> The intent of this success criterion is to help user understand what
> information is contained in different sections of the content. By
> titling sections clearly and descriptively, users can find the
> information they seek more easily, and they can understand the
> relationships between different parts of the content more easily.
> </Loretta's proposal>
> 
> <current>
> The intent of this success criterion is to help users understand how
> content is organized.
> 
> </current>
> 
> John
> 
> "Good design is accessible design."
> 
> Dr. John M. Slatin, Director
> Accessibility Institute
> University of Texas at Austin
> FAC 248C
> 1 University Station G9600
> Austin, TX 78712
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> 
> 
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: public-wcag-teamb-request@w3.org
> [mailto:public-wcag-teamb-request@w3.org] On Behalf Of Loretta Guarino
> Reid
> Sent: Friday, September 16, 2005 7:49 PM
> To: public-wcag-teamb@w3.org
> Subject: L3 SC4: Intent of this success criterion
> 
> 
> 
> Current text:
> 
> The intent of this success criterion is to help users understand how
> content is organized.
> 
> Proposed text:
> 
> The intent of this success criterion is to help user understand what
> information is contained in different sections of the content. By
> titling sections clearly and descriptively, users can find the
> information they seek more easily, and they can understand the
> relationships between different parts of the content more easily.
> 
> 
> Loretta Guarino Reid
> lguarino@adobe.com
> Adobe Systems, Acrobat Engineering
>