Mobile Note Comments Addressed

Hi Annika,

Let me go through them...

Abstract:
Remove repetition ("bring together - brought together") in last
paragraph: "This note presents the major findings of a symposium, which
was organised by the Research and Development Working Group (RDWG) to
bring researchers and practitioners together to discuss these challenges
and possible solutions. This symposium brought together researchers and
practitioners to discuss these challenges and possible solutions, to
help develop a roadmap for future research and development in the field."
*REMOVED*

Section 1:
Don't use apostrophe in plural of acronyms. (e.g. It should be "APIs"
not "API's") This occurs in several places.
See: http://oxforddictionaries.com/words/apostrophe
*CORRECTED Throughout*

Typo in 3rd paragraph: "The iOS default screen reader as VoiceOver"
should be "... is VoiceOver"
*CORRECTED*

4th paragraph: On-screen keyboards differ from physical keyboards
because they can adapt to the application or language that is currently
use and thus support the user.
*REMOVED*

Section 2.1
Remove stray characters "=."
*REMOVED*

Section 2.4
1st paragraph. The classification "are quite small" is too general. An
iPad with wireless keyboard is more similar to the desktop experience
than to a 4" smartphone.
*REMOVED*

The language of these sentences in the 1st paragraph needs improvement:
"Therefore, new interaction forms are emerged on mobile devices. Some of
these techniques and methods have developed for improving accessibility
for people with disabilities on desktop and they are migrated to mobile
devices."
*REWRITTEN*

Section 4.3
I'm not sure of this really belongs here, but when discussing
harmonization of standards you also need to look at standards for AT
(because for some people a mobile phone will not be accessible without AT).
*NO CHANGE - BEYOND SCOPE*


Cheers


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Si.

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