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Fwd: [sharpic/rdwg-note] [Introduction] Rewording sentence "comes with the OS is VoiceOver which is generally known among the accessible community to offer excellent accessibility features" (issue #8)

From: Simon Harper <simon.harper@manchester.ac.uk>
Date: Thu, 17 Jan 2013 16:41:59 +0000
Message-ID: <50F829D7.8000807@manchester.ac.uk>
To: RDWG <public-wai-rd@w3.org>

New issue 8: [Introduction] Rewording sentence "comes with the OS is VoiceOver which is generally known among the accessible community to offer excellent accessibility features"
https://bitbucket.org/sharpic/rdwg-note/issue/8/introduction-rewording-sentence-comes-with

Yeliz Yesilada:

It would be much better to reword this sentence "comes with the OS is VoiceOver which is generally known among the accessible community to offer excellent accessibility features".

accessible community -> accessibility community
excellent -> delete this, or soften...


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