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E2R sentence in pre-call

From: Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org>
Date: Wed, 06 Jun 2012 16:26:38 -0500
Message-ID: <4FCFCB0E.30709@w3.org>
To: Klaus Miesenberger <Klaus.Miesenberger@jku.at>, RDWG <public-wai-rd@w3.org> 
Hi Klaus and all,

For the E2R sentence in the Text Customization for Readability pre-call, I tried to further simplify the sentence structure to eliminate semicolons. Please see the sentence starting with "A related upcoming Symposium will address Easy-to-Read (E2R) language..." at http://www.w3.org/WAI/RD/wiki/Topic_3_pre-call

Does this work? Do you have other suggestions? (feel free to edit the wiki yourself, or send suggestions to me and I'll edit the wiki)

Thanks!
~Shawn
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