E2R sentence in pre-call

Hi Klaus and all,

For the E2R sentence in the Text Customization for Readability pre-call, I tried to further simplify the sentence structure to eliminate semicolons. Please see the sentence starting with "A related upcoming Symposium will address Easy-to-Read (E2R) language..." at http://www.w3.org/WAI/RD/wiki/Topic_3_pre-call

Does this work? Do you have other suggestions? (feel free to edit the wiki yourself, or send suggestions to me and I'll edit the wiki)

Thanks!
~Shawn

Received on Wednesday, 6 June 2012 21:26:49 UTC