Re: FW: Please review: Draft Call which includes Use Cases

One more 'Minor Change' - Extension of Jim's work -

[Original]
"Another example is a bar chart with some bars that are
several times longer than others, while other bars are so
small they are barely noticeable."

[Revised - 'Small' becomes 'Short', to match 'Longer',
above]
"Another example is a bar chart with some bars that are
several times longer than others, while other bars are so
short they are barely noticeable."

(OR, change "Longer" to "Larger")

Sean Stapleford
SStapleford@TecAccess.NET
Senior Assistive Technology Tester
TecAccess - http://www.TecAccess.NET/
(804) 749-8646

----- Original Message -----
From: "Jim Allan" <jimallan@tsbvi.edu>
To: "Marja-Riitta Koivunen" <marja@w3.org>; "Markku T.
Hakkinen" <hakkinen@dinf.ne.jp>; "Public-Wai-Rd"
<public-wai-rd@w3.org>
Sent: Wednesday, October 15, 2003 12:59 PM
Subject: RE: FW: Please review: Draft Call which includes
Use Cases


>
> Thanks for the rewrite Marja-Ritta
> good changes Markku.
>
> some minor changes to the last paragraph...
>
> <old>
> Another example is a bar chart; some bars are several
times longer than
> others while some are so small they are barely noticeable.
Reading the
> number associated with each bar may be useful but it does
not capture the
> instant recognition of seeing one bar twice as long as any
other in the
> chart.  How can we visualize these relationships in an
accessible way?
>
> <new>
> "Another example is a bar chart with some bars that are
several times longer
> than others,  while other bars are so small they are
barely noticeable.
> Reading the number associated with each bar may be useful
but it does not
> capture the instant recognition of seeing one bar twice as
long as any other
> in the chart."
>
> and some changes to the last question (my thought is that
we are not trying
> to visualize the information in an accessible way, but to
provide an
> alternative (non-visual) representation of the instantly
recognizable visual
> relationships....
>
> "How can we represent or summarize these  provide the same
information
> contained in these visual relationships in an accessible
way?"
>
> or
>
> "How can we provide the same information contained in
these visual
> relationships in an accessible way?"
>

Received on Wednesday, 15 October 2003 14:29:29 UTC