Re: [updated] Requirements for AERT

Hi,

Am Di, 25.06.2013, 16:08 schrieb Shadi Abou-Zahra:
> Dear Group,
>
> The latest requirements document for review is here:
>   - http://www.w3.org/WAI/ER/WD-AERT/ED-requirements

Some comments that are strictly speaking editorial:
* Objectives: 1: I would rephrase "their typical features" to "typical
features of such tools"; we don't want "their" to refer back to
"developers" ;-)
* Under "Types of tools": "Industrial/commercial and open source tools,
which test" should be rephrased to "Industrial/commercial and open source
tools that test" (without the "German comma"!), because the current
punctuation assumes that all tools test websites and applications.
* Under "Types of tools": "Focused tools, which test" -> "Focused tools
that ..." (same reason as previous comment).

Best regards,

Christophe


>
> Regards,
>    Shadi
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> Shadi Abou-Zahra - http://www.w3.org/People/shadi/
> Activity Lead, W3C/WAI International Program Office
> Evaluation and Repair Tools Working Group (ERT WG)
> Research and Development Working Group (RDWG)
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Received on Thursday, 27 June 2013 13:03:00 UTC