Feedback: EOW2 TF: 30 October Teleconference, different time

Looking pretty good :)

Just a couple of suggestions:

1. Mostly it says "we" - suggest changing "Now I'll give you a little
more ..." to "Now we'll give you a little more ..."

2. short answers - point 1: suggest "... is needed for each remaining
stage of ..."

3. following the short answers: suggest "... in order to better
understand the short answers above ..."

4. in para 2 of 'how is wcag 2 different': suggest "... WCAG 2.o
documents use a slightly different approach ..."

Finally, another FAQ to treat separately, (or incorporate into the
"done?" question near the mention of submissions) - "When will I get a
response to my comments?"

Cheers, Andrew
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-----Original Message-----
From: public-wai-eo-wcag2tf-request@w3.org
[mailto:public-wai-eo-wcag2tf-request@w3.org] On Behalf Of Shawn Henry
Sent: Tuesday, 31 October 2006 9:17 AM
To: wcag2tf; Michael Cooper; Judy Brewer
Subject: EOW2 TF: 30 October Teleconference, different time
Importance: High


EOWG WCAG 2.0 Materials Support Task Force Participants:

Based on feedback from Friday's EOWG, I took another pass at:
<http://www.w3.org/WAI/WCAG20/wcag2faq.html>

I'd like to get your feedback on this version. Let's meet 1/2 hour
later, which will give you a chance to read it over. (If you can't make
it, that's fine. If you can send an e-mail, that would be nice so we
know whether or not to wait for you.)

Logistics are:
Time:   6:00pm-7:30pm US Eastern / 22:00-23:30 UTC. For other time zones
see:
        http://www.timeanddate.com/worldclock/meeting.html
Bridge: +1.617.761.6200, conference code: 3692 ("EOW2")
IRC:    Channel: #eow2, server: irc.w3.org, port: 6665

NOTE: different start time for today: *6:00* US Eastern, and also
Daylight Savings time change.

Best,
~ Shawn


Shawn Henry wrote:
>
> EOWG WCAG 2.0 Materials Support Task Force Participants:
>
> We probably will not have a teleconference on Monday 30 Oct (Tue in
OZ);
> however, if we get edits done, we might. If you can hold the timeslot
> just in case, that would be great. I'll let you know as soon as it is
> looking more like we will or will not have the teleconference.
>
> NOTE the time change. I think that makes it 9:00am for you, Andrew,
> instead of 7:00?
>
> Time:    5:30pm-7:30pm US Eastern / 21:30-23:30 UTC. For other time
> zones see:
>         http://www.timeanddate.com/worldclock/meeting.html
>
> Best,
> ~ Shawn
>
>




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