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Feedback on Process-20140801 section 4

From: <timeless@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 12 Aug 2014 21:27:03 -0400
Message-ID: <20140813012703.25206875.77365.1981@gmail.com>
To: public-w3process@w3.org
I'm sorry that I didn't send this feedback on [1] earlier, I've been busy. 

{Section 4 Dissemination Policies}

> The Team makes every effort to ensure the persistence and availability of the following public information:

rfc language? (should)

W3C technical reports whose publication has been approved by the Director. Per the Membership Agreement, W3C technical reports (and software) are available free of charge to the general public; (refer to the W3C Document License [PUB18]).

the <;> <(...)> <.> is an odd sequence of punctuation

> A mission statement [PUB15] that explains the purpose and mission of W3C, the key benefits for Members, and the organizational structure of W3C.

PUB15 doesn't mention <purpose>

> The Process Document.

s/The/This/ ?
Also, given that there are now multiple Process documents, perhaps s/Document/Documents/
Given that there may be multiple documents, could TEAM please provide a page listing all active documents so that one doesn't have to hunt for them through /TR/ space (if they're even there...)

> To keep the Members abreast of W3C meetings, Workshops, and review deadlines, the Team provides them with a regular (e.g., weekly) news service and maintains a calendar [MEM3] of official W3C events.

rfc language? (should)

> Members are encouraged to send schedule and event information to the Team for inclusion on this calendar.

are -> rfc language (should/may)

> MUST NOT release this information to the general public or press.

I'd request the insertion of the article <the> before <press>.
I'd suggest splitting this into two distinct bullets as:

-> MUST NOT release this information to the general public, and
-> MUST NOT release this information to the press.‎

[1] http://www.w3.org/2014/Process-20140801‎
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