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Re: FPWD for ttml-imsc1

From: Thierry MICHEL <tmichel@w3.org>
Date: Thu, 24 Apr 2014 09:03:47 +0200
Message-ID: <5358B753.7060002@w3.org>
To: Pierre-Anthony Lemieux <pal@sandflow.com>
CC: W3C Public TTWG <public-tt@w3.org>
Pierre,

One more thing,

I have edited the Normative Section for [TTML1] reference

changed from

<dt id="bib-TTML1">[TTML1]</dt><dd rel="dcterms:requires">World Wide Web 
Consortium (W3C). Timed Text Markup Language 1 (TTML1) (Second Edition)

to

<dt id="bib-TTML1">[TTML1]</dt>
<dd rel="dcterms:requires">Glenn Adams, <a 
href="http://www.w3.org/TR/ttml1/"><cite>Timed Text Markup Language 1 
(TTML1) (Second Edition)</cite></a>, W3C Recommendation, 24 September 
2013. URL: <a 
href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2013/REC-ttml1-20130924/">http://www.w3.org/TR/2013/REC-ttml1-20130924/</a></dd>


Now for the broken fragment, looking at previous versions of your document
I changed the code to:

   <section id="recommended-character-sets">
       <h3 aria-level="2" role="heading" 
id="h3_recommended-character-sets"><span class="secno">5.2 
</span>Recommended Character Sets</h3>Authors should to select from the 
sets of characters specified in

       <a href="#recommended-unicode-code-points-per-language" 
class="sec-ref"><span class="secno">A.</span> <span 
class="sec-title">Recommended
             Character Sets</span></a> </section>


The document as is is ready for publication.
Let me know if it is OK.

see
http://www.w3.org/TR/2014/WD-ttml-imsc1-20140501/#recommended-character-sets

Thierry



On 24/04/2014 08:20, Thierry MICHEL wrote:
> Pierre,
>
> Thanks for the fixes.
> There is still broken fragment:
>
> http://www.w3.org/TR/2014/WD-ttml-imsc1-20140501/#recommended-character-sets-1
> (line 1180)
>
> the code is currently :
>
> <h3 aria-level="2" role="heading"
> id="h3_recommended-character-sets"><span class="secno">5.2
> </span>Recommended Character Sets</h3>Authors should to select from the
> sets of characters specified in <a
> href="#recommended-character-sets-1"></a>
>
> 2 issues:
>
> a) should I change
> href="#recommended-character-sets-1"
> to
> href="#recommended-character-sets"
>
> b) it seems the paragraph is missing some wording.
>
> Let me know.
>
> A part from this the document is ready for publication.
>
> Best,
>
>
> Thierry
>
>
> On 23/04/2014 23:49, Pierre-Anthony Lemieux wrote:
>> Hi Thierry,
>>
>> Thanks for the note.
>>
>> I have uploaded at [1] an updated draft intended to address the issues
>> below.
>>
>> [1]
>> https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/ttml/raw-file/72855f154e4e/ttml-ww-profiles/ttml-ww-profiles.html
>>
>>
>> The following URIs are namespaces URIs defined in the specification:
>>
>> http://www.w3.org/ns/ttml/profile/imsc1/text
>> http://www.w3.org/ns/ttml/profile/imsc1/image
>>
>> Based on [2], it sounds like they must resolve to namespace documents.
>> If so, I have prepared the following namespace documents:
>>
>> https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/ttml/raw-file/72855f154e4e/ttml-ww-profiles/imsc-text-namespace.html
>>
>> https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/ttml/raw-file/72855f154e4e/ttml-ww-profiles/imsc-image-namespace.html
>>
>>
>> [2] http://www.w3.org/2005/07/13-nsuri
>>
>> Re: name of the main page, should Overview.html be used going forward?
>>
>> Best,
>>
>> -- Pierre
>>
>>
>> On Thu, Apr 17, 2014 at 11:31 PM, Thierry MICHEL <tmichel@w3.org> wrote:
>>> Pierre,
>>>
>>> There are a few bugs in the document, which must be fixed. Please see
>>> bellow.
>>>
>>> 1- HTML validation
>>> there was an Error Line 679, Column 49: The width attribute on the col
>>> element is obsolete. Must use CSS instead.
>>>
>>> <colgroup> <col span="1" width="25%"> <col span="1"> </colgroup>
>>>
>>> I have replaced using CSS as follows
>>> <colgroup> <col span="1" style="width:25%"> <col span="1"> </colgroup>
>>>
>>> 2- CSS validation: OK
>>>
>>> 3- I have edited the SOTD section to have it Pubrules conformat
>>>
>>> 4- Links validation
>>>
>>> There are a few Broken fragments which MUST be fixed by yourself.
>>>
>>> http://www.w3.org/TR/2014/WD-ttml-imsc1-20140501/Overview.html#h3_ttp-aspectratio
>>>
>>> (lines 2302, 2305)
>>>
>>> http://www.w3.org/TR/2014/WD-ttml-imsc1-20140501/Overview.html#h3_ttp-progressivelydecodable
>>>
>>> (lines 2291, 2294)
>>> http://www.w3.org/TR/2014/WD-ttml-imsc1-20140501/Overview.html#h3_tts-forceddisplay
>>>
>>> (lines 2313, 2316)
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> 5- Namespace validation
>>>
>>> Error The Namespaces Checker was used for this test. The following is
>>> a list
>>> of URIs that might be (broken) namespace URIs. Note: If they are not
>>> namespace URIs, please just let the Webmaster know in your publication
>>> request.
>>>
>>> http://www.w3.org/ns/ttml/profile/imsc (1 occurrence)
>>>      -> 404 (Not Found)
>>> http://www.w3.org/ns/ttml/profile/imsc/image (1 occurrence)
>>>      -> 404 (Not Found)
>>> http://www.w3.org/ns/ttml/profile/imsc/text (1 occurrence)
>>>      -> 404 (Not Found)
>>> http://www.smpte-ra.org/schemas/2052-1/2010/smpte-tt#image (5
>>> occurrences)
>>>      -> 404 (Not Found)
>>> http://www.w3.org/TR/ttml-imsc1/ (1 occurrence)
>>>      -> 404 (Not Found)
>>>
>>> These URI should be resolved.
>>>
>>>
>>> 6-The document is in its final destination, though it will need another
>>> upload there, as there are changes to be added on your side.
>>>
>>>
>>> http://www.w3.org/TR/2014/WD-ttml-imsc1-20140501/Overview.html
>>>
>>> Let me know when you are done.
>>> you may want to edit the document from the above URI to saves my
>>> changes.
>>>
>>> Best,
>>>
>>> Thierry
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>
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