Last posting of normative text for Issue 35 (was Re: Issues for Monday Call)

This remains unchanged from last week. I will follow up with a different post on examples later tonight. Baring objections, I think this single one-line change is good to go into the draft at Roy’s convenience. 

Last chance to say otherwise if you disagree...

 Aleecia
 
> From: Aleecia M. McDonald [mailto:aleecia@aleecia.com <mailto:aleecia@aleecia.com>] 
> Sent: 22 June 2017 01:53
> To: public-tracking@w3.org <mailto:public-tracking@w3.org> (public-tracking@w3.org <mailto:public-tracking@w3.org>) (public-tracking@w3.org <mailto:public-tracking@w3.org>) <public-tracking@w3.org <mailto:public-tracking@w3.org>>
> Cc: Alan Toner <at@eff.org <mailto:at@eff.org>>
> Subject: Re: Issue 35 (was Re: Issues for Monday Call)
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> Question 1: any objections to the single sentence change to 6.5.8, or may editors make the change?
> Question 2: any additions on examples, or am I the only one holding things up there? 
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> Thanks,
>                Aleecia
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>> On Jun 19, 2017, at 10:46 AM, Aleecia M. McDonald <aleecia@aleecia.com <mailto:aleecia@aleecia.com>> wrote:
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>> […snip…]

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>> 6.5.8 lives here: https://www.w3.org/TR/tracking-dnt/#rep.policy <https://www.w3.org/TR/tracking-dnt/#rep.policy>
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>> My only addition is: “This URI may inform users of what changes for them between sending DNT:0 and DNT:1.” 
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>> Proposed new version of 6.5.8 in full:
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>> An origin server may send a property named policy with a string value containing a URI reference to a human-readable document that describes the relevant privacy policy for the designated resource. This URI may inform users of what changes for them between sending DNT:0 and DNT:1. The content of such a policy document is beyond the scope of this protocol and only supplemental to what is described in the machine-readable tracking status representation. If no policy property is provided, this information might be obtained via the links provided in controller <https://www.w3.org/TR/tracking-dnt/#dfn-controller>.
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