Re: [TCS] comments on 17 Feb 2015 editors draft from Roy T. Fielding on 2015-03-04 (public-tracking@w3.org from March 2015)

From: Roy T. Fielding <fielding@gbiv.com>
Date: Wed, 4 Mar 2015 09:50:49 -0800
To: David Singer <singer@apple.com>
Cc: Tracking Protection Working Group <public-tracking@w3.org>
Message-Id: <D6CA8041-60B1-4CA4-AA01-BB5370DA41F8@gbiv.com>

> On Mar 4, 2015, at 9:17 AM, David Singer <singer@apple.com> wrote:
> 
> Roy, thanks
> 
> two comments, one minor, one less so.
> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>>     3.3.1.1  No Secondary Uses
>>> 
>>>  A party MUST NOT use data collected for permitted uses for purposes other
>>>  than the permitted uses for which each datum was permitted to be
>>>  collected.
>> 
>> Yikes.  How about:
>> 
>>  A party MUST NOT use data collected for permitted uses for purposes
>>  other than those permitted uses.
> 
> A party MUST NOT use data that was collected for a permitted use, for any purpose other than the permitted use.
> 
> (minor, I think it’s better in the singular.)

Actually, no, because of the case where the same data is collected for multiple permitted uses. That's why the original is plural.

....Roy

Received on Wednesday, 4 March 2015 17:51:13 UTC