Re: Edited Draft for Considerations

Just to clarify:

(1) Is this proposing specific language for adoption in the June draft, in
response to Peter's call for specific proposals by June 26?
(2) If so, who is proposing it?



On Wed, Jun 26, 2013 at 12:03 PM, Shane Wiley <wileys@yahoo-inc.com> wrote:

>  Apologies – you may receive this from several individuals as we’re
> having issues sending the email to the public list.****
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> The attached edited draft represents industry discussion but not consensus
> as we didn’t have enough time to coordinate a full review of initial
> thoughts.  Please see these as directional correct but with some room for
> word-smithing.****
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> Thank you,****
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> - Shane****
>



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