CVS WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts

Update of /w3ccvs/WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts
In directory gil:/tmp/cvs-serv17507

Modified Files:
	tracking-dnt.html 
Log Message:
(editorial) fix a typo and some xrefs

--- /w3ccvs/WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts/tracking-dnt.html	2014/03/29 03:32:39	1.253
+++ /w3ccvs/WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts/tracking-dnt.html	2014/03/29 04:04:17	1.254
@@ -302,9 +302,9 @@
       </p>
       <p>
         A user agent MUST offer users a minimum of two alternative choices
-        for a <q>Do Not Track</q> preference: <code>unset</code> or
-        <code>DNT:1</code>.
-        A user agent MAY offer a third alternative choice: <code>DNT:0</code>.
+        for a <q>Do Not Track</q> preference: <code><dfn>unset</dfn></code> or
+        <code><dfn>DNT:1</dfn></code>.
+        A user agent MAY offer a third alternative choice: <code><dfn>DNT:0</dfn></code>.
       </p>
       <p>
         If the user's choice is <code>DNT:1</code> or <code>DNT:0</code>, the
@@ -454,14 +454,14 @@
           A user agent MUST generate a <a>DNT</a> header field with a
           field-value that begins with the numeric character "1" (%x31) if the
           user's tracking preference is <a>enabled</a>, their preference is
-          for <a>DNT:1</a>, and no exception has been granted for the request
-          target (see <a href="#exceptions" class="sectionRef"></a>).
+          for <code>DNT:1</code>, and no exception has been granted for the
+          request target (see <a href="#exceptions" class="sectionRef"></a>).
         </p>
         <p>
           A user agent MUST generate a <a>DNT</a> header field with a
           field-value that begins with the numeric character "0" (%x30) if the
           user's tracking preference is <a>enabled</a> and their preference is
-          for <a>DNT:0</a>, or if an exception has been granted for the
+          for <code>DNT:0</code>, or if an exception has been granted for the
           request target.
         </p>
         <p>
@@ -477,7 +477,7 @@
 
         </pre>
         <p>
-          The remainder of the DNT field-value, after the initial character,
+          The remainder of the <a>DNT</a> field-value, after the initial character,
           is reserved for future extensions. DNT extensions can only be
           transmitted when a tracking preference is <a>enabled</a>.
         </p>
@@ -620,9 +620,9 @@
             deployment on production systems during the initial periods of
             testing compliance and during adjustment periods due to future
             protocol changes or shifting regulatory constraints. Note that
-            this value does necessarily indicate that the DNT signal will be
-            ignored, nor that tracking will occur as a result of accessing the
-            designated resource.
+            this value does not indicate that the user's preference will be
+            ignored, nor that tracking will occur as a result of accessing
+            the designated resource.
           </p>
         </section>
 

Received on Saturday, 29 March 2014 04:04:18 UTC