CVS WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts

Update of /w3ccvs/WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts
In directory gil:/tmp/cvs-serv11024

Modified Files:
	tracking-dnt.html 
Log Message:
(editorial) target requirements on what must obey them (user agent. proxy, server, origin server) like new HTTP standard

--- /w3ccvs/WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts/tracking-dnt.html	2014/03/29 05:29:09	1.255
+++ /w3ccvs/WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts/tracking-dnt.html	2014/04/01 07:00:58	1.256
@@ -864,28 +864,31 @@
         <section id='site-wide-status-resource'>
           <h4>Site-wide Tracking Status</h4>
           <p>
-            An origin server MUST provide a <dfn>site-wide tracking status
-            resource</dfn> at the well-known identifier [[RFC5785]]
+            A <dfn>site-wide tracking status resource</dfn> provides
+            information about the potential tracking behavior of resources
+            located at that origin server. A site-wide tracking status
+            resource has the well-known identifier
           </p>
           <pre>/.well-known/dnt/</pre>
           <p>
-           (relative to the URI of that origin server) for obtaining
-           information about the potential tracking behavior of resources
-           provided by that origin server.  A tracking status resource can be
-           used for verification of DNT support, as described in
-           <a href="#using-tracking-status" class="sectionRef"></a>.
+            relative to the origin server's URI [[RFC5785]].
           </p>
           <p>
-            A valid retrieval request (e.g., a <code>GET</code> in HTTP)
-            on the well-known URI MUST result in either a successful response
-            containing a machine-readable representation of the site-wide
-            tracking status, as defined below, or a sequence of redirects that
-            leads to such a representation.
-            A user agent MAY consider failure to provide access to such a
-            representation equivalent to the origin server not implementing
-            this protocol.  The representation can be cached, as described
+            An origin server that receives a valid <code>GET</code> request
+            targeting its site-wide tracking status resource MUST send either
+            a successful response containing a machine-readable representation
+            of the site-wide tracking status, as defined below, or a sequence
+            of redirects that leads to such a representation. Failure to
+            provide access to such a representation implies that the target
+            origin server does not implement this protocol.
+            The representation can be cached, as described
             in <a href="#status-caching" class="sectionRef"></a>.
           </p>
+          <p>
+            See <a href="#using-tracking-status" class="sectionRef"></a> for
+            examples of how tracking status resources can be used to discover
+            support for this protocol.
+          </p>
         </section>
 
         <section id='request-specific-status-resource'>
@@ -902,7 +905,7 @@
             status resource applies to the current request.
           </p>
           <p>
-            The <dfn>tracking status resource space</dfn> is defined by the
+            A <dfn>tracking status resource space</dfn> is defined by the
             following URI Template [[URI-TEMPLATE]]:
           </p>
           <pre>/.well-known/dnt/{+status-id}</pre>
@@ -1136,8 +1139,8 @@
             is implying that its domain owner is the sole data controller;
             information about the data controller ought to be found on the
             designated resource's site root page, or by way of a clearly
-            indicated link from that page (i.e., no controller property is
-            considered equivalent to: <code>"controller":["/"]</code>).
+            indicated link from that page (i.e., an absent controller property
+            is equivalent to: <code>"controller":["/"]</code>).
           </p>
           <p>
             If the <a>designated resource</a> has joint data controllers

Received on Tuesday, 1 April 2014 07:01:00 UTC