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WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts tracking-dnt.html,1.166,1.167

From: Roy Fielding via cvs-syncmail <cvsmail@w3.org>
Date: Sat, 29 Sep 2012 04:15:09 +0000
To: public-tracking-commit@w3.org
Message-Id: <E1THoSL-000784-PO@lionel-hutz.w3.org>
Update of /w3ccvs/WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts
In directory hutz:/tmp/cvs-serv27312

Modified Files:
	tracking-dnt.html 
Log Message:
fix two grammar bugs added since last WD

Index: tracking-dnt.html
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RCS file: /w3ccvs/WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts/tracking-dnt.html,v
retrieving revision 1.166
retrieving revision 1.167
diff -u -d -r1.166 -r1.167
--- tracking-dnt.html	28 Sep 2012 07:55:31 -0000	1.166
+++ tracking-dnt.html	29 Sep 2012 04:15:07 -0000	1.167
@@ -357,14 +357,14 @@
         <p>
           The DNT field-value sent by a user agent MUST begin with the
           numeric character "1" (%x31) if a tracking preference is
-          <a>enabled</a>, and the preference is for no tracking, and
+          <a>enabled</a>, the preference is for no tracking, and
           there is not a site-specific exception for the origin server
           targeted by this request.
         </p>
         <p>
           The DNT field-value sent by a user agent MUST begin with the
           numeric character "0" (%x30) if a tracking preference is
-          <a>enabled</a>, and the preference is to allow tracking in general
+          <a>enabled</a> and the preference is to allow tracking in general
           or by specific exception for the origin server targeted by this
           request.
         </p>
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