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WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts tracking-dnt.html,1.160,1.161

From: David Singer via cvs-syncmail <cvsmail@w3.org>
Date: Fri, 07 Sep 2012 16:11:54 +0000
To: public-tracking-commit@w3.org
Message-Id: <E1TA19u-0006ew-M5@lionel-hutz.w3.org>
Update of /w3ccvs/WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts
In directory hutz:/tmp/cvs-serv25526

Modified Files:
	tracking-dnt.html 
Log Message:
correcting english, sigh



Index: tracking-dnt.html
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RCS file: /w3ccvs/WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts/tracking-dnt.html,v
retrieving revision 1.160
retrieving revision 1.161
diff -u -d -r1.160 -r1.161
--- tracking-dnt.html	7 Sep 2012 16:05:24 -0000	1.160
+++ tracking-dnt.html	7 Sep 2012 16:11:52 -0000	1.161
@@ -1794,8 +1794,8 @@
 			auction system chain can use the data for that interaction and combine it 
 			with existing profiles and data.  The sub-services to the named third party 
 			do not acquire an independent right to process the data for independent 
-			secondary uses unless they have, themselves, obtain a DNT:0 
-			header from the user agent (by their own request or the request of 
+			secondary uses unless they, themselves, receive a DNT:0 
+			header from the user agent (as a result of their own request or the request of 
 			a first-party). In our example of advertisement networks that 
 			means the sub-services can use existing profiles in combination with the 
 			data received, but they can not store the received information into a 
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