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From: Roy Fielding via cvs-syncmail <cvsmail@w3.org>
Date: Wed, 17 Oct 2012 08:39:54 +0000
To: public-tracking-commit@w3.org
Message-Id: <E1TOPAQ-0001JX-7H@lionel-hutz.w3.org>
Update of /w3ccvs/WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts
In directory hutz:/tmp/cvs-serv4952

Modified Files:
	tracking-dnt.html 
Log Message:
ACTION-322: Clarify "policy" member to refer to "relevant privacy policy",
not necessarily tracking-specific


Index: tracking-dnt.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /w3ccvs/WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts/tracking-dnt.html,v
retrieving revision 1.170
retrieving revision 1.171
diff -u -d -r1.170 -r1.171
--- tracking-dnt.html	29 Sep 2012 08:27:51 -0000	1.170
+++ tracking-dnt.html	17 Oct 2012 08:39:51 -0000	1.171
@@ -943,7 +943,7 @@
   "audit": [
     "http://auditor.example.org/727073"
   ],
-  "policy": "/tracking.html",
+  "policy": "/privacy.html#tracking",
   "control": "http://example.com/your/data"
 }
 </pre>
@@ -1007,7 +1007,7 @@
           <p>
             An OPTIONAL member named <code><a>audit</a></code> MAY be
             provided with an array value containing a list of URI references
-            to external audits of the designated resource's tracking policy
+            to external audits of the designated resource's privacy policy
             and tracking behavior in compliance with this protocol.
             Preferably, the audit references are to resources that describe
             the auditor and the results of that audit; however, if such a
@@ -1021,11 +1021,11 @@
           <p>
             An OPTIONAL member named <code><a>policy</a></code> MAY be
             provided with a string value containing a URI-reference to a
-            human-readable document that describes the tracking policy for
-            the designated resource.
+            human-readable document that describes the relevant privacy policy
+            for the designated resource.
             The content of such a policy document is beyond the
             scope of this protocol and only supplemental to what is described
-            by this machine-readable tracking status representation.
+            in the machine-readable tracking status representation.
           </p>
           <pre class="abnf">
 <dfn>policy</dfn>        = %x22 "policy" %x22
@@ -1139,7 +1139,8 @@
             at which the service's tracking behavior might increase. For
             example, if the tracking status response is set to expire in seven
             days, then the earliest point in time that the service's tracking
-            behavior can be increased is seven days after the policy has been
+            behavior can be increased is seven days after the tracking status
+            representation has been
             updated to reflect the new behavior, since old copies might
             persist in caches until the expiration is triggered. A service's
             tracking behavior can be reduced at any time, with or without a
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