WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts tracking-dnt.html,1.122,1.123

Update of /w3ccvs/WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts
In directory hutz:/tmp/cvs-serv6920

Modified Files:
	tracking-dnt.html 
Log Message:
changed from on/off/unset to DNT:1, DNT:0, unset
added the example of a user being asked at first use etc.
minor editorial punctuation etc.



Index: tracking-dnt.html
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RCS file: /w3ccvs/WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts/tracking-dnt.html,v
retrieving revision 1.122
retrieving revision 1.123
diff -u -d -r1.122 -r1.123
--- tracking-dnt.html	24 Jun 2012 02:00:37 -0000	1.122
+++ tracking-dnt.html	11 Jul 2012 20:58:37 -0000	1.123
@@ -229,11 +229,11 @@
       <p>
         A user agent MUST offer users a minimum of two alternative choices
         for a <q>Do Not Track</q> preference: <code>unset</code> or
-        <code>on</code>.
-        A user agent MAY offer a third alternative choice: <code>off</code>.
+        <code>DNT:1</code>.
+        A user agent MAY offer a third alternative choice: <code>DNT:0</code>.
       </p>
       <p>
-        If the user's choice is <code>on</code> or <code>off</code>, the
+        If the user's choice is <code>DNT:1</code> or <code>DNT:0</code>, the
         tracking preference is called <dfn>enabled</dfn>; otherwise, the
         tracking preference is called <dfn>not enabled</dfn>.
       </p>
@@ -257,7 +257,9 @@
         configuration, install an extension or add-on that is specifically
         designed to add a tracking preference expression,
         or make a choice for privacy that then implicitly includes a
-        tracking preference (e.g., <q>Privacy settings: high</q>).  Likewise,
+        tracking preference (e.g., <q>Privacy settings: high</q>).  The user-agent 
+        might ask the user for their preference during startup, perhaps on 
+        first use or after an update adds the tracking protection feature. Likewise,
         a user might install or configure a proxy to add the expression
         to their own outgoing requests.
       </p>
@@ -353,14 +355,14 @@
         <p>
           The DNT field-value sent by a user agent MUST begin with the
           numeric character "1" (%x31) if a tracking preference is
-          <a>enabled</a>, the preference is for no tracking, and
+          <a>enabled</a>, and the preference is for no tracking, and
           there is not a site-specific exception for the origin server
           targeted by this request.
         </p>
         </p>
           The DNT field-value sent by a user agent MUST begin with the
           numeric character "0" (%x30) if a tracking preference is
-          <a>enabled</a> and the preference is to allow tracking in general
+          <a>enabled</a>, and the preference is to allow tracking in general
           or by specific exception for the origin server targeted by this
           request.
         </p>
@@ -1369,7 +1371,7 @@
         <section>
           <h3>Exception use by browsers</h3>
           <p>
-            If a user wishes to be tracked by a <strong>target</strong> on the
+            If a user wishes to allow tracking by a <strong>target</strong> on the
             <strong>top-level domain</strong>, this should result in two user-agent
             behaviors:
             <ol>

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