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Re: [Cool URIs] WD 2007-12-17

From: Leo Sauermann <leo.sauermann@dfki.de>
Date: Sun, 16 Mar 2008 15:03:17 +0100
Message-ID: <47DD28A5.1050907@dfki.de>
To: Christoph Päper <christoph.paeper@crissov.de>
CC: public-sweo-ig@w3.org

Hi Christoph,

I want to especially thank you for your valuable feedback and the time 
you invested,
your detailed comments did improve the document.

we closed our round of reviews for the 20071217 version of "cool uris" 
and incorporated feedback.
The feedback and resolved issues are here:
https://gnowsis.opendfki.de/repos/gnowsis/papers/2006_11_concepturi/feedback/index.htm

After another telco with TAG, we will publish a last-call working draft.

The current version of the editors draft is here:
https://gnowsis.opendfki.de/repos/gnowsis/papers/2006_11_concepturi/html/cooluris_sweo_note.html

below the answers to your feedback,


There is one open issue which we couldn't address, copied here for your 
attention:

  > 4.5. Linking
 > "|<link />| element", "|<link>| element" (in diagram) -> "|link| element"
 
 we cannot replicate this, it seems you want something bold-faced...
 we will not change the graphic now, unless you object strongly.



here is the rest:
 
 It was Christoph Päper who said at the right time 19.12.2007 02:18 the
 following words:
 >
 > Some minor editorial comments.
 >
 > 2. URIs for Web Documents
 > - One of the dots in "Alice and bob both work at Example Inc.." should
 > go.
 
 done.
 
 > - Choose either [AWWW] or [WWW-Arch] [Web architecture], don't mix them.
 
 done, thx!
 
 > 4.1. Hash URIs
 > - "Again, the 303 See Other status code must be used." Only 302 has
 > been used so far. The transition between 4.1 and 4.2 is not really
 > straight forward.
 
 changed to "The 303...". This makes it coherent without much change.
 
 > 4.2. 303 URIs
 > - "“303 See Other”" Remove quotation marks here, but decide whether to
 > use typographic or typewriter style in general (also for apostrophes).
 
 using <tt> and removed the ""
 
 > 4.3. Choosing between 303 and Hash
 > "http://www.example.com/about# product456" Excess space after hash
 > sign (also Alice and Bob used to be the examples).
 
 done, changed to bob and alice.
 
 > 4.5. Linking
 > "|<link />| element", "|<link>| element" (in diagram) -> "|link| element"
 
 we cannot replicate this, it seems you want something bold-faced...
 we will not change the graphic now, unless you object strongly.
 
 > 5. Examples from the Web
 > "several 100k" does not seem like recommendable English.
 
 changed to "several thousand", not to overstress the fact how much it 
rocks...
 
 > <http://ontoworld.org/wiki/Special:ExportRDF/Karlsruhe> seems to work,
 > too.
 
 thx! a much "cooler uri", also.
 
 
 > 6.1. New URI Schemes
 > "resourcse" -> "resources"
 
 done.
 
 > 6.2. Reference by Description
 > "A person, for example, could be described with her name, date of
 > birth, and social security number." 'his',
 
 replaced by "described by name,.."
 
 > SSN is US-specific.
 
 ignored, the international aspect can be neglected,
 it is a good example and I also have a social securty number (but am 
European...).
 Its culturally independent and good to grasp.
 
 > 8. Acknowledgements
 > "Stuart Williams (HP Labs) and Norman Walsh from TAG" -> Stuart
 > Williams from HP Labs and Norman Walsh from TAG" or "Stuart Williams
 > (HP Labs) and Norman Walsh (TAG)"
 
 both are from Tag, replaced with:
 Stuart Williams and Norman Walsh from TAG
 
 > "AAstrand" -> "Åstrand", probably.
 
 its AAstrand, I just asked him :-) (he sits opposite of me at office)
 
 > "bmb+f" -> "BMBF" (Bundesministerium für Bildung und Forschung)
 >
 done
 
 > Perhaps you could drop the protocol and domain part more often in prose.
 
 hm, nah. that abbreviation may help, but its more precise as is.
 
 > Both "email" and "e-mail" are used in the document and prbably more
 > small inconsistences.
 
 replaced "e-mail" which was used once.
 
 
 > |@@|-Notes are stylistically deemphasised, when they should be
 > emphasised (like they are in some other W3C drafts).
 >
 
 changed to a mixture of this and 
http://www.w3.org/StyleSheets/TR/W3C-errata.css
>
>
>


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