Re: use cases for the flyer

Great, thanks! Much better (and also shorter!)

However: you did not add the paragraph with the bulleted items which
would fit somewhat differently on the flyer. Did you forget that, or was
it intentional?

Cheers

Ivan

Lee Feigenbaum wrote:
> Hi Ivan, Dunja, and SWEOids everywhere,
> 
> I took a stab at wordsmithing the main paragraph of the 2nd case; it's up 
> on the wiki page.
> 
> Lee
> 
> 
> Ivan Herman wrote on 06/28/2007 05:03:28 AM:
> 
>> Dunja,
>>
>> I hope you do not mind... I have copied the content of your text to a
>> separate wiki page, that makes it easier for people to edit or add their
>> own:
>>
>> http://www.w3.org/2001/sw/sweo/group/wiki/Semantic_Web_Flyer/Hotstories
>>
>> I still prefer the second use case of yours, but I tried to change the
>> text a little bit from an English point of view and, a little bit
>> shorter. Susie or another anglo-saxon should still run over the text...
>>
>> I have added my version to the same wiki page
>>
>> Thanks
>>
>> Ivan
>>
>>
>> Dunja Ewinger wrote:
>>> Dear all,
>>>
>>> attached you find some stories for the first page of the flyer. I am 
> not
>>> sure whether they are suitable for the flyer.
>>> If you have a better "hot" story, please let me know!
>>>
>>> Best regards,
>>> Dunja
>>>
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> 

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