I've tweaked the wording (& markup) a little, but tried to avoid substantively changing the content. I've not attempted to deal with any TAG comments etc. I've also included a few more notes inline ( [@@danja ...] ), and a couple of queries at the end. I suspect a few more revisions might be needed to keep everyone happy (presumably they can occur after it's published as draft). Haven't run a diff yet, having to work through someone else's machine. Cheers, Danny. -- http://dannyayers.com
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