Hi Antoine, Nicely done! Cheers, --Jon On Tue, Apr 28, 2009 at 6:19 PM, Antoine Isaac <aisaac@few.vu.nl> wrote: > Hi everyone, > > For the following action: > > ACTION: Antoine make minor edits to >> [21]http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/WD-skos-ucr-20070516/ to prepare for >> publication as Group Note on 19 May [recorded in >> [22]http://www.w3.org/2009/04/21-swd-minutes.html#action02] >> > > > I have prepared a new editor's draft of the Use Cases at [1]. > > The main changes are recorded in [2]. > An important aspect that I have changed is the "tense" of the document. > There are many reference the "the SKOS model to come", such as in "This > document presents the preparatory work for a future version of SKOS". I have > changed that to acknowledge that this work is now done, eg. by citing the > SKOS reference and Primer. > I have also changed references to 2006 issues (eg. > "SKOS-I-AnnotationOnLabel") to refer to the issues such as we tracked them > on the W3C system (eg. http://www.w3.org/2006/07/SWD/track/issues/27). I > hope that this is ok! > > Please be aware that I've done this quite in a hurry, as I'm leaving today > for two weeks. I will review once more the editor's draft between May 15 and > May 19, but any comment is welcome until then! > In particular, Jon and Daniel, who have been informed of these plans, may > want to have a look at this draft and make some modifications. If so, Jon, > Daniel, please mail the WG of your changes! I will not be able to forward > them... > > Best, > > Antoine > > [1] http://www.w3.org/2006/07/SWD/SKOS/usecases/ucr-20090428.html > [2] http://www.w3.org/2006/07/SWD/SKOS/usecases/ChangeLog-090428.txt > >Received on Tuesday, 19 May 2009 13:18:56 GMT
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