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Re: [SKOS] Comments on SKOS Primer

From: Antoine Isaac <aisaac@few.vu.nl>
Date: Tue, 06 Jan 2009 15:52:46 +0100
Message-ID: <4963703E.4040404@few.vu.nl>
To: Thomas Baker <baker@sub.uni-goettingen.de>
CC: SWD Working Group <public-swd-wg@w3.org>

Tom,

And here is some reaction to your more detailed comments.
Almost everything was really helpful making the document more elegant!

Thank you very much again for this precious help,

Antoine

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> Diff output, by type of change, from "significant" to "minor"
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These are all nice enhancements, I think!

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> Editorial changes that should be checked more closely
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> 1674,1676c1676,1678
> < <code>skos:prefLabel</code>, in combination with private use language
> < (sub-)tags as defined by <cite>RFC4646</cite> [<cite><a
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>> <code>skos:prefLabel</code>, in combination with private-use language
>> tags (or subtags) as defined by <cite>RFC 4646</cite> [<cite><a

In principle I'd be happy with this change, but http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc4646.txt still uses "private use" subtags...


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> Systematic spelling of "modeling" and "labeling"

I supposed this applies as well to "labelled", I've changed them
Btw there are some "labelling" in the SKOS reference!


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> KOSs (plural of KOS)
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OK!

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> "Note -- " as opposed to "Note on", which looks nicer, in my opinion...:-)
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+1

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> "Like" versus "such as" (really not a big deal, but "such as" is sometimes more precise)
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OK, except maybe

> 1133,1134c1134,1136
> < re-assert the RDF statements for the <code>ex1:cats</code> concept, e.g., its
> < <code>skos:prefLabel</code>. Assuming <code>ex1:cats</code> has been
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>> re-assert things such as the <code>skos:prefLabel</code> of the
>> the <code>ex1:cats</code> concept.
>> Assuming <code>ex1:cats</code> has been

You would use "things" here, really? Wouldn't "Information" be more accurate, if you don't like "statements"?

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> Minor editorial changes
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All are OK.

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> "This version" URIs (instead of "latest version" URIs)
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OK!
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