On Wed, Feb 28, 2007 at 11:22:34AM +0100, Ivan Herman wrote: > Abstract, first paragraph, first sentence: 'are chock-full': let us try > to avoid colloquialisms that most of the non-English World would not > understand:-) (the same term reappears in the first sentence of section 1) Another comment on the Abstract (bearing in mind that abstracts can be read out of context!): The opening sentence says: "Current web pages, written in HTML, are chock-full of structured data." A reader could misunderstand this to mean that current HTML pages are _already_ full of structured data, just waiting to be cut-and-pasted between Semantic Web applications. Section 2.1 draws a distinction between "implicit data" and a "standard mechanism to explicitly express it". Making such a distinction in the Abstract (even the first sentence) would clarify things. Tom -- Tom Baker - tbaker@tbaker.de - baker@sub.uni-goettingen.deReceived on Wednesday, 28 February 2007 13:40:24 GMT
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