FW: updated RDFa WD published

Re RDFa Primer 1.0 - working draft.

The first paragraph is unclear (except perhaps to those of you/us who know
what it is about and don't need a Primer). The draft mixes the current state
of affairs with the desired future stare of RDF-enabled XHTML. I'd suggest
that you change the first sentence in this from 

"Current web pages, written in HTML, are chock-full of structured data"

To something like this

"Current web pages may contain a large amount of structured data, but the
unstructured, text-oriented nature of HTML, makes such information
inaccessible." 

The next sentence could be changed to "IF publishers could ... etc. " and a
few minor changes to the following paragraph would make the send clearer. It
would be a good idea to include a notion of what "structured data" is too. 

If it's not too late and if you like I can have a go at a quick re-write
along these lines - please let me know.

Regards

Neil McNaughton
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-----Original Message-----
From: public-rdf-in-xhtml-tf-request@w3.org
[mailto:public-rdf-in-xhtml-tf-request@w3.org] On Behalf Of Ralph R. Swick
Sent: 17 May 2006 21:29
To: public-swbp-wg@w3.org; public-rdf-in-xhtml-tf@w3.org
Subject: updated RDFa WD published


Now on the W3C home page [1]:

Working Draft: RDFa Primer

2006-05-17: The HTML Working Group and the Semantic Web Best Practices and
Deployment Working Group jointly have published an updated Working Draft of
the RDFa Primer 1.0. RDFa expresses metadata in XHTML-compatible constructs
and extensions, enabling a new world of user functionality. Produced by the
groups' RDF in XHTML Task Force, the draft is a companion to the XHTML 2.0
specification. Read about the HTML Activity and the Semantic Web. 

-- http://www.w3.org/News/2006#item84



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