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[OEP] review simple part-whole draft

From: Guus Schreiber <schreiber@cs.vu.nl>
Date: Mon, 24 Oct 2005 16:16:21 +0200
Message-ID: <435CECB5.10508@cs.vu.nl>
To: Alan Rector <rector@cs.man.ac.uk>, Christopher Welty <welty@us.ibm.com>
CC: SWBPD list <public-swbp-wg@w3.org>

Alan, Chris,

I've read through the draft, As far as I'm concerned all issues have 
been addressed adequately. My only worry is with the use of the abstract 
syntax. First, the reference is in the list at the end, but not in the 
running text. Second, I think the abstract syntax reads well, but some 
minimal explanation is needed. In particular, you'll have to explain the 
"partial/complete" distinction, which will not be obvious to most 
non-insiders. You will also have to mention the mixing of abstract 
syntax and Turtle. Maybe add a short section on "syntax used".

Guus

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