- From: Bassetti, Ann <ann.bassetti@boeing.com>
- Date: Mon, 17 Sep 2012 14:07:02 -0700
- To: "public-socbizcg@w3.org" <public-socbizcg@w3.org>
Hello All -- I finally finished my suggested edits for the "CTO Guide to Social Business, v1". (Needed to sit on some long plane rides to find the time!) Please see the link below for both .doc version (with "Track Changes" turned on), or 2 PDF files (one 'clean' and one showing the edits. http://www.w3.org/community/socbizcg/wiki/Main_Page#Documents You will see that a lot of the suggestions are merely English-language nits (adding hypens as I just did in the preceding adjectival phrase and etc). But there are a few more substantive suggestions. I fly home tonight, and hope to be on the call tomorrow. -- Ann Ann Bassetti Associate Technical Fellow Boeing Information Technology Global Collaboration Technologies mobile: +1.206.218.8039 email: ann.bassetti@boeing.com
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