[Bug 5561] SML should define a Simple XLink Reference Scheme

http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=5561


Kirk Wilson <kirk.wilson@ca.com> changed:

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--- Comment #14 from Kirk Wilson <kirk.wilson@ca.com>  2009-03-22 14:41:48 ---
The following are my comments - referencing the original comments.

LKC1: Title should follow the style SML xxx Reference Style to be consistent
with the SML spec.

LKC7: The full title of section 2 should be restored.  Simply entitling the
section "Definition" and depending on the context for what the definition is of
seems to be an inconvience to the reader.

LKC8: I would vote against restructing section 2.  Since it is relatively
simple to define an SML XLink reference scheme (as opposed, e.g., to an
EPR-based SML reference scheme), we should keep the structure as close as
possible to that of the SML reference scheme definition.

LKC14: The "active voice" modification is actually not "active voice", but an
imperative: "Obtain a document. . ".  This seems to be taking a step into the
"algorithmic" form of expressing the defintion, which the WG has rejected--with
VERY good reasons (IMHO).

I agree with John that LKC19 (D has no value) is not irrelevant and LKC22 is
correct as it stands ("or" vs. "and").  Good catch on the sml:targetType.


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