Re: [presentation-api] Copy editing of non-normative text

I made another pass to polish the introduction and the Cross Origin Access section.  I'm pretty happy now :)

To improve legibility, I updated to link the first time a term like _presentation_ appears in a given paragraph, and not link following occurrences.


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