Re: CAPTCHA Draft: Blinded Verifications Added

How about:

The growing use of distributed, network-based delivery mechanisms (aka "the
cloud") has seen a concentration of web content and software service
delivery in the form of  Content Delivery Networks (CDN) such as Akamai,
Cloudflare, and Amazon Cloudfront

Where "the cloud" gets some definition as well...

JF

On Wed, May 8, 2019 at 10:05 PM Scott Hollier <scott@hollier.info> wrote:

> To Janina
>
> I've had a look at Section 3.3 and have a suggested change. The intro to
> the section was a little hard for me to read - I'd never come across the
> word ' parlance' before and had to look it up!
>
> As such, I'd suggest a simpler intro to the section. Here's my suggestion:
>
> Change:
>
> "While its meaning for most people may be as opaque as its meteorological
> namesake, the "cloud" has become a familiar term of common parlance. For
> our purposes here it describes the growing concentration of web content and
> software service delivery in content delivery networks (CDN) such as
> Akamai, Cloudflare, and Amazon Cloudfront"
>
> to:
>
> The growing use of the online cloud has seen a concentration of web
> content and software service delivery in the form of  Content Delivery
> Networks (CDN) such as Akamai, Cloudflare, and Amazon Cloudfront
>
> Everything else reads great to me.
>
> Scott.
>
>
>
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: Janina Sajka <janina@rednote.net>
> Sent: Wednesday, 8 May 2019 8:47 PM
> To: public-rqtf@w3.org
> Subject: CAPTCHA Draft: Blinded Verifications Added
>
> I've finally managed to draft Sec. 3.3 now available at:
>
> https://w3c.github.io/apa/captcha/#turing-tokens-in-the-cloud
>
> --
>
> Janina Sajka
>
> Linux Foundation Fellow
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>
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> Chair, Accessible Platform Architectures        http://www.w3.org/wai/apa
>
>
>
>

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Received on Thursday, 9 May 2019 13:45:32 UTC