RE: CAPTCHA Draft: Blinded Verifications Added

To Janina

I've had a look at Section 3.3 and have a suggested change. The intro to the section was a little hard for me to read - I'd never come across the word ' parlance' before and had to look it up!

As such, I'd suggest a simpler intro to the section. Here's my suggestion: 

Change: 

"While its meaning for most people may be as opaque as its meteorological namesake, the "cloud" has become a familiar term of common parlance. For our purposes here it describes the growing concentration of web content and software service delivery in content delivery networks (CDN) such as Akamai, Cloudflare, and Amazon Cloudfront"

to: 

The growing use of the online cloud has seen a concentration of web content and software service delivery in the form of  Content Delivery Networks (CDN) such as Akamai, Cloudflare, and Amazon Cloudfront

Everything else reads great to me. 

Scott. 



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-----Original Message-----
From: Janina Sajka <janina@rednote.net> 
Sent: Wednesday, 8 May 2019 8:47 PM
To: public-rqtf@w3.org
Subject: CAPTCHA Draft: Blinded Verifications Added

I've finally managed to draft Sec. 3.3 now available at:

https://w3c.github.io/apa/captcha/#turing-tokens-in-the-cloud

-- 

Janina Sajka

Linux Foundation Fellow
Executive Chair, Accessibility Workgroup:	http://a11y.org

The World Wide Web Consortium (W3C), Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI)
Chair, Accessible Platform Architectures	http://www.w3.org/wai/apa

Received on Thursday, 9 May 2019 03:05:47 UTC