Re: Meeting agenda for 30 May 2018

Hi All,

Just re-read it and noticed a few things that need to be addressed:

  * First appearance of "captcha" should be capitalized and acronym expanded
  * Syntax-O under "sound output" at "However, according to the CNet
    article..." -- the sentence doesn't parse
  * "Acknowledgements" section needs to be replaced with up to date
    people acks (we should discuss) and funder acks (Michael can swap
    in); and the previous acks (people and funders) should be acked in
    the past (I think that Michael also has a good format for that, from
    other docs).

Thanks,

- Judy

On 5/30/2018 2:41 AM, Scott Hollier wrote:
> To Janina
>
> I've just finished reading it - you've done a fantastic job!
>
> I only have one bit of feedback and it relates to the first sentence in the Abstract.
>
> Can we change:
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> "Because robots are both ubiquitous and pernicious on the web,..."
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> To:
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> "As a result of robots being ubiquitous and pernicious on the web,..."
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> Or something similar. I'm haunted by my high school English teacher reminding me that sentences don't read well with 'because' as the first word so if we could change that one thing it's the only part that I'd like to change, otherwise I reckon it's great!
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: Janina Sajka <janina@rednote.net>
> Sent: Wednesday, 30 May 2018 4:27 AM
> To: White, Jason J <jjwhite@ets.org>
> Cc: Research Questions Task Force <public-rqtf@w3.org>
> Subject: Re: Meeting agenda for 30 May 2018
>
> Colleagues:
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> It continues a work in progress, but I am actively editing the text in a branch document. I hope to finish my current editing before our call.
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> Please review:
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> https://rawgit.com/w3c/apa/captcha-janina/captcha/index.html
>
> Janina
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>
> White, Jason J writes:
>> Meeting Logistics
>>
>>    *   Time: Wednesday, 30 May 2018 at 9:00am Boston time (1300 UTC).
>>    *   Please see the teleconference details on the Web page at https://www.w3.org/2017/08/telecon-info_rqtf<https://na01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2017%2F08%2Ftelecon-info_rqtf&data=02%7C01%7Cjjwhite%40ets.org%7Cc6386a5d695b48381e2b08d4e9c9bdf2%7C0ba6e9b760b34fae92f37e6ddd9e9b65%7C0%7C0%7C636390500081136350&sdata=tMbgHiF%2FsGbhSVPJjjVdIrKZsHWU6eTHTmzw6gNjf5E%3D&reserved=0>
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>> Agenda
>> This is expected to be a brief update and coordination meeting to discuss and plan further work related to our current research topics, including addressing issues arising from the draft APA Working Group Note on CAPTCHA, as well as extending our review of virtual reality accessibility research to encompass augmented reality.
>> References
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>>    *   Research Questions Task Force - wiki: https://www.w3.org/WAI/APA/task-forces/research-questions/wiki/Main_Page
>>    *   Minutes of previous meeting: Editor's Draft of revised note on CAPTCHA: https://w3c.github.io/apa/captcha/https://www.w3.org/2018/05/02-rqtf-minutes.html
>>    *   Draft Accessible Platform Architectures Working Group Charter: https://www.w3.org/2018/03/draft-apa-charter
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