RE: Syntax Document Editor's Draft update for review

Shane,

Thank you for this information - this is really good news ;)
Hope you'll find the following (first) comments helpful.

>From most important IMHO to rather editorial comments:

+ Section 4: As this is the core of the processing, why not doing
  it even a bit more formal as it used to be, eg., in [1]

+ The term 'URI mapping' is used in Section 3.6 the first time (why
there?)
  I'd love to see a clean definition of this (maybe even before this
occurrence?)

+ Right after the Abstract, I think a Scope section would be of great
help.
  It could for example say something like: "For authors of structured
metadata
  and for RDFa extractor developers etc."

+ I especially really like section 3. Great stuff; just one minor
comment: section 3.8
  would benefit from a bit more 'prose' - for example comparison with
other RDF serialisation
  syntaxes. One could even go further and add a reference to  a nice
overview on RDF syntax
  'history' - http://rewerse.net/deliverables/m24/i4-d9a.pdf Appendix A

+ I am not sure if the document has been checked against [2] and with
[3]?

More feedback coming soon ...

Cheers,
	Michael

[1] http://www.w3.org/MarkUp/2004/rdf-a.html#div191865760
[2] http://www.w3.org/2001/06/manual/#Terms
[3] http://www.w3.org/2002/08/diction

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 Michael Hausenblas, MSc.
 Institute of Information Systems & Information Management
 JOANNEUM RESEARCH Forschungsgesellschaft mbH
 Steyrergasse 17, A-8010 Graz, AUSTRIA
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> -----Original Message-----
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> [mailto:public-rdf-in-xhtml-tf-request@w3.org] On Behalf Of 
> Shane McCarron
> Sent: Wednesday, September 12, 2007 7:25 PM
> To: public-rdf-in-xhtml-tf.w3.org
> Subject: Syntax Document Editor's Draft update for review
> 
> 
> There are still some open issues, but Mark, Steven, and I 
> have checked in all of our changes and I have put up a draft 
> at http://www.w3.org/MarkUp/2007/ED-rdfa-syntax-20070912/
> 
> Please review this document in preparation for the next task 
> force call.  We do not plan on checking in any more edits 
> until after we have gotten comments and discussed them.
> 
> Thanks for your patience.
> 
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Received on Wednesday, 12 September 2007 19:48:18 UTC