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Re: [Fwd: Some typos in WD]

From: Dan Connolly <connolly@w3.org>
Date: Wed, 05 Oct 2005 08:56:41 -0500
To: andy.seaborne@hp.com
Cc: RDF Data Access Working Group <public-rdf-dawg@w3.org>
Message-Id: <1128520602.28805.279.camel@dirk>

On Wed, 2005-09-07 at 10:27 +0100, Seaborne, Andy wrote:
> Corrections made based on this message - a coupel of exceptions inline.
> 
> Thanks to Olivier for the review.
> 
> Q for Eric near the end.

I see Eric replied.

> v1.483 committed

These are clearly editorial improvements that are consistent with
WG proceedings to date.

Please do respond to the commentor, asking if these changes address
the comment to his satisfaction.

Sorry for the delay in responding. I had treated this as an FYI until
I got another signal that this was a request for confirmation.

> 	Andy
> 
> Olivier Corby wrote:
>  > I have found these typos  in the   WD.
>  >
>  > Best regards
>  >
>  > Olivier.
>  >
>  >
>  >
>  >
>  >
>  > 2.2
>  >
>  > Definition : SPARQL Query
>  >
>  > The sentence below is present in the definition and repeated  in the
>  > paragraph just below :
>  > "The graph pattern of a query is called the query pattern"
> 
> Done
> 
>  >
>  >
>  > 2.4
>  >
>  > Definition : Pattern Solution
>  >
>  > "The result f replacing every v in a graph pattern" ->
>  > "The result f replacing every variable v in a graph pattern"
> 
> Done
>  >
>  >
>  > 2.8
>  >
>  > Predicate-Object Lists
>  >
>  > "more than one triple pattern be employing" ->
>  > "by employing"
> 
> Done
>  >
>  >
>  > 7.
>  >
>  > Definition : RDF Dataset Graph Pattern
>  >
>  > (<u1> G1)  ->  (<u1>, G1)   (three times)
>  >
> 
> Done
>  >
>  >
>  > 8.3
>  >
>  > Restriction by Bound Variables
>  >
>  > Some variable names start with ? (?w ?whom) and some do not (mbox whom).
>  >
> 
> Done
> 
>  >
>  >
>  > 9.1
>  >
>  >
>  > "providing more than IRI" ->
>  > "providing more than one IRI"
>  >
> 
> Done
> 
>  >
>  >
>  > 9.2 Specifying Named Graphs
>  >
>  > "used to provide one, named graph"  ->
>  > "used to provide one named graph"
>  >
> 
> Done
> 
>  >
>  >
>  > 9.3
>  >
>  > Solution for ?who is "Bob", "Alice" and not "Bob Hacker", "Alice Hacker"
>  >
>  >
>  > "This query finds the mbox together, with" ->
>  > "This query finds the mbox together with"
> 
> The document is correct ("who" comes from the dc:publisher not foaf:name).
> 
>  >
>  >
>  > 10.1
>  >
>  > Definition : Projection
>  >
>  > "The projection of solution QS over a set" ->
>  > "The projection of solution QSi over a set"
> 
> It's better with QSi => QS
> 
>  >
>  >
>  > Definition : Distinct Solution Sequence
>  >
>  > "then write set(S) is the set" ->
>  > "then write set(S) for the set"
>  >
> 
> Done
> 
>  >
>  > 11
>  >
>  > Namespaces
>  >
>  > "XML Schema datatypes with the prefix op:" ->
>  > "XML Schema datatypes with the prefix xs:"
>  >
> 
> Done
> 
>  >
>  > 11.1.1
>  >
>  > XML Schema []
> 
> Eric - is this going to be a reference?
> 
> I made it a ref the existing XMLSCHEMA-2 reference.
> 
> 
>  >
>  >
>  >
>  > 11.2.1.1
>  >
>  >
>  > "When a operand" ->
>  > "When an operand"
>  >
> 
> Done
> 
>  >
>  >
>  > 11.2.3.2
>  >
>  > "Queries with union and optionals" ->
>  > "Queries with union and optional"
> 
> "Queries with unions and optionals"
> 
>  >
>  >
>  > FILTER bound(?date)) ->
>  > FILTER bound(?date)
>  >
> 
> Done
> 
>  >
>  > Table 11.2
>  >
>  > "Casting in SPARQL is peformed" ->
>  > "Casting in SPARQL is performed"
>  >
> 
> Done
> 
>  >
>  > "the casting operatoins" ->
>  > "the casting operations"
> 
> Done
> 
> 
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Dan Connolly, W3C http://www.w3.org/People/Connolly/
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