Re: SPARQL / Language spec ready for review

>> (Section 11 and further tomorrow...)

These are my final few comments.  I support publishing the document as 
a WD.

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[[ 1.107 -- 11.2 Constructing an Output Graph
The CONSTRUCT form returns an RDF graph specified by either a graph 
template or by "*".  If a graph template is supplied...
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"Graph template" should be "graph pattern", or should at least be 
defined to be the use of a graph pattern in this particular syntactic 
position.

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[[ 1.107 -- A. SPARQL Grammar
This grammar is defines the allowable constructs in a SPARQL query.  ...
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-is

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[[ 1.107 -- B. References
[1] " Three Implementations of SquishQL, a Simple RDF Query Language",
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Spurious space before the quote.

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Received on Monday, 11 October 2004 12:04:37 UTC