- From: Seaborne, Andy <andy.seaborne@hp.com>
- Date: Tue, 24 Aug 2004 09:48:38 +0100
- To: Dan Connolly <connolly@w3.org>
- Cc: RDF Data Access Working Group <public-rdf-dawg@w3.org>, "Eric Prud'hommeaux" <eric@w3.org>
-------- Original Message -------- > From: Dan Connolly <mailto:connolly@w3.org> > Date: 23 August 2004 22:33 > > On Mon, 2004-08-09 at 10:13, Seaborne, Andy wrote: > > Eric and I have been working on the language document and will > > continue to do so. > > > > http://www.w3.org/2001/sw/DataAccess/rq23/ > > > > This is still incomplete. > > I see $Revision: 1.38 $ of $Date: 2004/08/22 04:10:17 $ ... > > > The goal of the document is to meet the needs of > > someone wanting a complete description of the language and also to > > define the language in precise terms. > > > > We would like comments on any area but especially: > > > > + Sections 2,3,4, which start on SELECT, constraints and optionals. > > + document structure > > + approach of mixing examples and formal description. > > Is that still what you want feedback on the most? Yes - all feedback welcome. Those areas are the most important; content comments on structure and style are more important that presentation matters at this stage. Section 4 is going to be revised and completed very soon (the next day or so). > > Ideally, I'd get a version of this that a couple reviewers > could go over with a fine-tooth-comb before the ftf meeting... > at least the parts of the spec that are not at issue. Point noted. The current draft is OK for comments. A F2F-checkpoint draft will be ready by at least two weeks before the meeting. Andy > > > Andy > -- > Dan Connolly, W3C http://www.w3.org/People/Connolly/
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