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SPARQL Protocol spec. errors (editorial )

From: Barclay, Daniel <daniel@fgm.com>
Date: Thu, 30 Jul 2009 14:34:34 -0400
Message-ID: <4A71E7BA.4050008@fgm.com>
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Regarding the SPARQL Protocol for RDF document current at
http://www.w3.org/TR/rdf-sparql-protocol/
(http://www.w3.org/TR/2008/REC-rdf-sparql-protocol-20080115/):



* Section 2 says:

     This set of documents comprises the specification of the SPARQL
     Protocol:
        ...

   No--the specification comprises that set of documents.
   (A whole comprises it parts; the parts do not comprise the whole.)



* Section 2.2 says:

     The output serialization of the queryHttpGet and queryHttpPost
     bindings is intentionally under constrained ... The fault
     serialization of queryHttpGet and queryHttpPost is also intentionally
     under constrained.

   That should be "... under-constrained ..." (both occurrences).




Also, please do not set "overflow: scroll" for PRE elements (or whatever
you do to cause the code example to have individual horizontal scroll
bars).

Let them overflow normally, so the user can use the browser's main
horizontal scroll bar (rather than having to use each individual
horizontal scroll bar (and sometimes have to scroll down just to get
to the that scroll bar)).

Note that in the single-column style W3C specifications, content that
is wider than the browser window does not cause the remainder of the
text to wrap to a width wider than the browser window, so the above
overriding of overflow behavior is not needed.



Daniel
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