rdf11-concepts: abstract should summarize, not just describe

• From: Dan Connolly <dckc@madmode.com>
• Date: Wed, 31 Aug 2011 21:54:57 -0500
• To: public-rdf-comments@w3.org
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re http://www.w3.org/TR/2011/WD-rdf11-concepts-20110830/

The Abstract should be a condensed version of the document, not just a
brief description.

the 1st sentence in 3.1 seems like a good starting point:

"The underlying structure of any expression in RDF is a collection of
triples, each consisting of a subject, a predicate and an object. A
set of such triples is called an RDF graph (defined more formally in
section 6). This can be illustrated by a node and directed-arc
diagram, in which each triple is represented as a node-arc-node link
(hence the term “graph”)."


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Dan Connolly
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Received on Monday, 5 September 2011 13:07:26 UTC