Re: Responses to David's pre-CR review

On 24 Jan 2012, at 18:20, David McNeil wrote:
>>>  * "in the data values of either column" - Would it be helpful to add the word "referenced", so this would read: "in the data values of either _referenced_ column"?
>> 
>> Changed. I also replaced “contains multiple columns” with “references multiple columns” earlier in the sentence for consistency.
> 
> It looks like this was messed up in the editing. I think "template references multiple pairs" should be changed back to "template contains multiple pairs". Alternatively the sentence can be re-worked to describe columns in both places.

Right. That's what happens when I rush changes :-/ Reverted.

Richard

Received on Tuesday, 24 January 2012 18:25:30 UTC