Re: (Editorial) Last Call Comments on the Direct Mapping document

Juan,

thanks for those changes that you have made... And I consider those issues as closed.

Thanks

Ivan

On Nov 15, 2011, at 07:00 , Juan Sequeda wrote:

> Hi Ivan,
> 
> Thanks for your comments.
> 
> My comments inline. I have updated the Editor's draft accordingly [1]
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> Eric, Alexandre: there are two comments that I would like you guys to deal with. Thanks!
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> [1] http://www.w3.org/2001/sw/rdb2rdf/directMapping/
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> On Tue, Oct 4, 2011 at 6:07 AM, Ivan Herman <ivan@w3.org> wrote:
> Hi guys,
> 
> some buglets...
> 
> Ivan
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> Right before 2.3, the bullet item with the note
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> the predicate URI is wrong (it is still the former version), it should say <People#ref-deptName.deptCity>
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> Done!
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> In the additional/changed triples in section 2.3, we should also add
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> <People/ID-7> <People#ref-deptName.deptCity> <Department/name-accounting.city-Cambridge> .
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> (this is also a triple that would change if the primary key was different)
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> Done!
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> Appendix A.4, using set-builder notation:
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> Rule [44] still includes an editorial comment
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> //@@ I can't explain why this was:....
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> Also: I must admit I did not have the time to check the whole thing in detail, but I do not see where the predicate URI-s using 'ref-XXXX-YYY' are created. Are you sure the 'ref-' prefix is indeed part of the definition? Should that be in [38]?
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> Eric, Alexandre: can you respond to this. 
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> Appendix A.4, using set notation
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> I have the impression that [36] is wrong in the sense that it was not adapted to the latest version of the URI construction (still using '=' sign...)
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> Also, the same question on the 'ref-XXX-YYY' as for the previous version. Note also that the English text misses the 'ref-' string, too. Here again, it should be [38], shouldn't it?
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> Eric, Alexandre: can you respond to this. 
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> General comment on Appendix B
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> It would be useful to use a different style (eg, background colour) for the boxes defining the mappings and the ones denoting an example.
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> Thanks for the suggestion. I followed the way R2RML does this. Done!
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> Comment on Appendix B.3.1.
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> I miss the reference to the reference property iri-s. It seems that the whole formalism uses the 'generateLiteralProperty' function only, but I would expect, in this case, a separate generateReferenceProperty function. This should be defined and referred to from here...
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> Thanks for catching this. Done! 
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