Re: Last Call for Comments before FPWD

On 22.10.2010 10:04, Harry Halpin wrote:
> I'd like to have when people send in FPWD comments, they cc the listserv.

I read the document carefully and added a large number of improvements 
suggestions as well as many minor corrections.
Please find my changes and comments in the attached document (in both 
Word and PDF version). I guess not all of the comments have to be 
addressed for the FPWD.

Have a nice weekend everybody,

Sören