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R2RML spec. comments (mostly editorial)

From: Barclay, Daniel [USA] <Barclay_Daniel@bah.com>
Date: Thu, 13 Sep 2012 16:48:19 +0000
To: "public-rdb2rdf-comments@w3.org" <public-rdb2rdf-comments@w3.org>
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Regarding the R2RML: RDB to RDF Mapping Language specification currently
at http://www.w3.org/TR/r2rml/:


In 4.1: "Explicit typing of the resources in a mapping graph with R2RML classes is 
  OPTIONAL.  Their presence in a graph has no effect on the behaviour of an R2RML 
  processor. ":

  In "Explicit typing ...  is OPTIONAL.  Their presence ...," that occurrence of "their" isn't 
  quite right.

  (For the plural "their," the only (explicit) candidate for the antecedent of "their" is
  "the resources," but the saying "the presence of the resources" has no effect would
  be a major contradiction.)

  If the intended antecedent is the "explicit typing,"  then "their" needs to be "its."

  If the intended antecedent is the (implicitly alluded-to) declarations that represent/
  implement the "explicit typing," then "their" should probably be something like
  "declarations."


In 4.4: " For tables without a primary key, the Direct Graph requires that a fresh blank 
   node is created for each row. ":

  That "... requires that ... node is" should be ..." requires that ... node be..." (subjunctive
  rather than indicative).


In 4.4: "... re-use ...": 

  That should probably be simply "... reuse ..."


In 5: "Double quotes inside delimited identifiers must be immediately followed by 
  another double quote.":

  That would be clearer if "Double quotes ..." were changed to  "A double-quote ..." 
  (or "A double-quote character ..."). 

  (The mixing of plural and singular seems to make the original statement ambiguous,
  or at least unclear.)

  ** Wait--that's still broken--per that wording, the first double quote (inside the identifier) 
  generates an infinite substring of double-quote characters.  

  Something needs to be reworded to avoid that recursion.  Maybe adding a word or two
  to distinguish escaping vs. escaped (encoded) double quotes, or represented vs. actual
  double quotes, or something similar, would solve the problem.


5: "... delimited identifiers that are not in all-upper-case are not ...":

  That "... are not in all-upper-case ..." probably should be "... are not in all upper 
  case ..." or "... are not all-upper-case ...").

  (The following "... all-upper-case delimited and undelimited identifiers are ..." is .. fine.) 

  (I can't tell if "upper case" and "upper-case"  should be "uppercase"; my dictionary lists
  both.)


Daniel
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